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Waardige dukeraars.

Ik zit met een klein probleem. Ik ben nu bezig met een onderzoeksrapport. Hierin moet een samenvatting in het nederlands en Engels. Nou is dat laatste een beetje een probleem.

Ik heb met eigen inzicht en met woordenboeken de tekst geschreven maar die zit waarschijnlijk helemaal vol met spel en vooral stijlfouten. Zelf zie ik ze echter niet. Zouden jullie misschien eens naar de tekst willen kijken en feedback kunnen geven. Thanks.  (.....Support is de naam van de organisatie waar het onderzoek voor is gedaan). Doordat duken.nl best goed rankt in google heb ik de naam even verwijderd)

I followed my internship by .....Support. .....Support is an Internet marketing agency established in ...... They work on daily bases for the SME through the Netherlands. The tasks of .....Support consists of three main issues:

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Each of these three cases is a speciality of one employee within .....Support. During the internship and graduation I focused on search engine optimization (SEO).

Before the actual research, I first began a literature survey. This literature survey helped me to know what SEO is and how it works. This suvey was nessesary before I could start the final research. After I gathered some knowledge about the subject, I started the practical. I worked step by step to illuminate the various aspects of SEO. These aspects are discussed in detail.

Then I’ve investigated how .....Support currently utilizes the various SEO methods. In the end, recommendations have been given to .....Support how they can optimize their own SEO.

All the information above is based on one main question. This main question is:

"How can .....Support apply their SEO to the CRM customer-company process?"

The ultimate targetgoal is to optimize customer relationships. I have examined the role which SEO can play in this process. During the reading of this research you’ll find that out. The main thing which I can give to .....Support is that they have to work organized and structured to proceed. .....Support has an shortage on manpower and time. They have to set priorities, and the SEO from their own is not a priority at the moment. And this priority is something SEO can’t solve because it’s something internal.

Alvast superbedankt. Reacties waardeer ik zeer

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After I gathered some knowledge about the subject, I started the practical.

Zou ik veranderen naar:

After I gathered some knowledge about this subject, I started the practical.

Bedoel je in deze zin: This suvey was nessesary before I could start the final research.

Niet survey?

Deze zin zou ik weglaten: This main question is:

Dit: The ultimate targetgoal is to optimize customer relationships.

Zou ik veranderen naar:

Our ultimate targetgoal is to optimize our customer relationships.

En deze laatste paar zinnen zou ik anders zeggen:

They have to set priorities, and the SEO from their own is not a priority at the moment. And this priority is something SEO can’t solve because it’s something internal.

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I followed my internship by .....Support. .....Support is an Internet marketing agency established in ...... They work on daily bases for the SME through the Netherlands. The tasks of .....Support consists of three main issues:

- Search Engine Optimalisation Optimization

- Search Engine Marketing

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Each of these three cases is a speciality specialty of one employee within .....Support. During the internship and graduation I focused on search engine optimization (SEO).

Before the actual research, I first began a literature survey. This literature survey helped me to know what SEO is and how it works. This suveysurvey was nessesarynecessary before I could start the final research. After I gathered some knowledge about the subject, I started the practical. I worked step by step to illuminate the various aspects of SEO. These aspects are discussed in detail.

Then I’ve investigated how .....Support currently utilizes the various SEO methods. In the end, recommendations have been given to .....Support how they can optimize their own SEO.

All the information above is based on one main question. This main question is: Laat dit laatste zinnetje weg

"How can .....Support apply their SEO to the CRM customer-company process?"

The ultimate targetgoalalleen Goal of alleen target is to optimize customer relationships. I have examined the role which SEO can play in this process. During the reading of this research you’ll find that out. The main thing which I can give to .....Support is that they have to work organized and structured to proceed. .....Support has an shortage on manpower and time. They have to set priorities, and the SEO from their own is not a priority at the moment. And this priority is something SEO can’t solve because it’s something internal.

Grammaticaal heb ik nog niet echt naar gekeken, dit waren voornamelijk spelfouten.

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I followed my internship by at .....Support. .....Support is an Internet marketing agency established in ...... They work on daily bases for the SME throughout (ja, aan elkaar vast) the Netherlands on a daily basis. The tasks assignments of .....Support consists of three main issues:

- Search Engine Optimalisation Optimization

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Each of these three cases is has a speciality specialist of one employee within .....Support. During the internship and graduation, I focused on search engine optimization (SEO).

Before the actual research, I first began started a literature survey. This literature That survey helped me to know what SEO is and how it works tought me everything about SEO and. This survey was nessesary before I could start helped me through the final research. After I gathered some knowledge about the subject, Thereafter, I started the practical the practicum (?) took place. [[i worked step by step to illuminate the various aspects of SEO.]] Gibberish... These All aspects are discussed in detail. Where?

't Hoeft natuurlijk niet allemaal perfect te zijn en ik zal ook wel wat fouten maken, maar 't is nogal veel verbeterwerk zoals je ziet.

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SUPER jongens en dame :) echt tof dat jullie hebben geholpen. ik laat het topic nog even open staan. meer feedback is welkom maar echt superbedankt alvast voor deze reacties. Ze helpen zeker.

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Wat een geweldige hulp weer :) Ben er gewoon trots op om te zien. We kunnen wel uitbreiden naar DukeN.NL Leren Alles ;)

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SUPER jongens en dame :) echt tof dat jullie hebben geholpen. ik laat het topic nog even open staan. meer feedback is welkom maar echt superbedankt alvast voor deze reacties. Ze helpen zeker.

Als je je tekst eventjes aanpast naar onze adviezen kijk ik er nog een keertje goed naar ;) De vorige keer was meer qua zins opbouw :P
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Je zou ook de Nederlandse tekst hier neer kunnen zetten en dan vertalen wij hem naar het engels :)

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Je zou ook de Nederlandse tekst hier neer kunnen zetten en dan vertalen wij hem naar het engels :)

Zijn tekst is al prima Engels, dus het zou eigenlijk alleen maar slechter kunnen worden (denk ik).
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I followed my internship by at .....Support. .....Support is an Internet marketing agency established in ...... They work on daily bases for the SME throughout (ja, aan elkaar vast) the Netherlands on a daily basis. The tasks assignments of .....Support consists of three main issues:

- Search Engine Optimalisation Optimization

- Search Engine Marketing

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Each of these three cases is has a speciality specialist of one employee within .....Support. During the internship and graduation, I focused on search engine optimization (SEO).

Before the actual research, I first began started with a literature survey. This literature That survey helped me to know what SEO is and how it works tought taught me everything about SEO and. This survey was nessesary before I could start helped me through the final research. After I gathered some knowledge about the subject, Thereafter, I started the practical the practicum Practicum klopt. took place. [[i worked step by step to illuminate the various aspects of SEO.]] Gibberish... These All aspects are discussed in detail. Where?

't Hoeft natuurlijk niet allemaal perfect te zijn en ik zal ook wel wat fouten maken, maar 't is nogal veel verbeterwerk zoals je ziet.

Nu nog even iemand met geel er door heen en het wordt een regenboor :P

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I followed my internship by at .....Support. .....Support is an Internet marketing agency established in ...... They work on daily bases for the SME throughout (ja, aan elkaar vast) the Netherlands on a daily basis. The tasks assignments of .....Support consists of three main issues:

- Search Engine Optimalisation Optimization

- Search Engine Marketing

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Each of these three cases is has a speciality specialist of one employee within .....Support. During the internship and graduation, I focused on search engine optimization (SEO).

Before the actual research, I first began started with a literature survey. This literature That survey helped me to know what SEO is and how it works tought taught me everything about SEO and. This survey was nessesary before I could start helped me through the final research. After I gathered some knowledge about the subject, Thereafter, I started the practical the practicum Practicum klopt. took place. [[i worked have been working step by step to illuminate the various aspects of SEO.]] Gibberish... These All aspects are discussed in detail. Where?

't Hoeft natuurlijk niet allemaal perfect te zijn en ik zal ook wel wat fouten maken, maar 't is nogal veel verbeterwerk zoals je ziet.

@Markey54 alstu de regenboog :P

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t heeft even geduurd maar hier de verbetering:

I followed my internship at .....Support. .....Support is an Internet marketing agency established in ...... They work for the SME throughout the Netherlands on a daily basis. The assignments of .....Support consists of three main issues:

- Search Engine Optimization

- Search Engine Marketing

- Web design and development

Each of these three cases has a specialist within ....Support. During the internship and graduation, I focused on search engine optimization (SEO).

Before the actual research, I started with a literature survey. That survey thought me everything about SEO and helped me taught the final research. Thereafter the practicum survey took place.

I have been working step by step, to look deeper in the various aspects of SEO. These aspects are discussed in detail and will be showed in this report. Then I’ve investigated how ....Support currently utilizes the various SEO methods.

In the end, recommendations have been given to ....Support how they can optimize their own SEO.

All the information above is based on one main question.

"How can ....Support apply their SEO to the CRM customer-company process?"

The ultimate goal is to optimize customer relationships. I have examined the role which SEO can play in this process. During the reading of this research you’ll find that out.

The main thing which I can give to ....Support is that they have to work organized and structured to proceed. .....Support has an shortage on manpower and time. They have to set priorities, and the SEO from their own is not a priority at the moment. This priority is something SEO can’t solve because it’s something internal.

enne, jullie weten het. THANKS AGAIN!!

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t heeft even geduurd maar hier de verbetering:

I followed my internship at .....Support. .....Support is an Internet marketing agency established in ...... They work for the SME throughout the Netherlands on a daily basis. The assignments of .....Support consists of three main issues:

- Search Engine Optimization

- Search Engine Marketing

- Web design and development

Each of these three cases has have a specialist within ....Support. During the internship and graduation, I focused on Search Engine Optimization (Zou ik met hoofdletters doen.) (SEO).

Before the actual research, I started with a literature survey. That survey thought taught me everything about SEO and helped me taught through the final research. Thereafter the practicum survey took place.

I have been working step by step, to look deeper in the various aspects of SEO. These aspects are discussed in detail and will be showed in this report. Then/Next I’ve investigated how ....Support currently utilizes the various SEO methods.

In the end, recommendations have been given to ....Support how they can optimize their own SEO.

All the information above is based on one main question.

"How can ....Support apply their SEO to the CRM customer-company process?"

The ultimate goal is to optimize customer relationships. I have examined the role which that SEO can play in this process. You’ll find that out during the reading of this research you’ll find that out.

The main thing/advice which I can give to ....Support is that they have to work organized and structured to proceed (grow?). .....Support has an shortage on manpower and time. They have to set priorities, and the their own SEO from their own is not a priority at the moment. This priority is something SEO can’t solve because it’s something internal.

enne, jullie weten het. THANKS AGAIN!!

Rood = verbetering

Blauw = opmerking

Groen = Suggestie die ik beter vind ;)

Paars = Verplaatsing

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super bedankt weer!!, ik ben zo voldoende geholpen. Allemaal heel erg bedankt.

Ik gooi m op slot :D

nogmaals dank!

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